Does Mikala like Tenzin?
85% chance.
Will Tenzin ask her out?
60%.
Question 6 is about
50/50.
Question 6 can go to
Hell-
'cause Tenzin won't ask her,
not if he knows that.
Too much danger in knowing
A shame- they'd've been great,
if they'd been oblivious.
Homer jumped the gorge
without knowing (or thinking)
broke his everything on the way down
but
it must have been a helluva trip.
Numbers would have frozen me
would have frozen me
Thank [not God, not God!]
they
didn't catch me.
Wow! Love the second stanza, the repeated "numbers would have frozen me"--sharp as a tack, and tightly focused. Great work, Ashley!
ReplyDeleteAmazing work Ashley! This is a good example of people's fear of taking a risk. Very well written :)
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